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Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
6/10 Sometimes it makes sense... sometimes not.
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
7/10 Not bad.
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
6.5/10 A little bit boring. Mine never gets good reviews.
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for advertising in your signature.
May 30, 2008 -
Re: A Battling Plane
Okay, we'll try this one. Edits in bold. Battling Plane (2) This is my second attempt at this poem... Edited (original was quoted by the post below =) [ I ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Lymerics(sp?)
Okay... One, it's spelled limerick. Two... it has five lines, not four. Here's the rhyming sequence: 1 1 2 2 1 Also, the first, second, and fifth lines are longer ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Fred Weasley Eulogy
:D I loved it, to start with. I'm not going to quote-edit it, because there aren't enough edits to make. A few little things: In stanza six, your rhythm wasn't ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: A Fresh Start.
Welcome to the site! You haven't, I believe, reviewed anything yet, but you should review two stories/poems (etc.) before posting any of your own work. Also, for every story/poem you ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Frog Prince
My review was just taken by Sapphire. Although I don't agree with all her edits (no offense meant, just a few with different preference of wording), she took care of ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Mutts - Enemies
The Mutts pieces don't have to be read in order. They're written in random order out of a list of 100 one-word prompts in a challenge found on LiveJournal (PM ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Dear Mr. Publisher
Dear Mr. Publisher, I hope my plea isn’t in vain. Please find enclosed a manuscript, Maybe "You'll find enclosed..."?? written in blue crayon. Vain and crayon don't rhyme. You see, ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Mutts - Thunder
:D Hey Gryph, guess who's back. (This one was slightly rougher, however, so I will have some edits. [ In bold, of course ]) For new readers: You don't have ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Marmalade!
I didn't like the strawberries, I have to admit. The mug wasn't that great either... but the dog was awesome. Love the mustache, especially, but the eyes and hat are ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Wings Chapter 1 -- R&R please?
Edits in bold. The northern sky was a dull , uninteresting gray all the way to the horizon, where low banks of swirling clouds collected around the distant mountain peaks. ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: What should I have for supper next week?
Subway. Definitely. And Subway isn't fast food as such. XD It can be kind of slow, actually. But Subway has loads of choices and is really good.
Apr 11, 2008
